Reflection:
For this elevator pitch I took some of the advice that I received from the last assignment and implemented it here. First, I tried to get directly to the point of my pitch, this helped me to include some extra content that fell within the 90 seconds. Second, I shortened my pitch quite a bit. This was something that I struggled with in my past two attempts. While it felt somewhat rushed, it did help me to provide a more straight forward pitch. I felt more relaxed on this assignment, as this was our third try. Altogether, I feel confident that I would be able to give this pitch a try in a real business setting.
Hi Darren,
ReplyDeleteYou're final elevator pitch submission was really good! I think diving right in at the beginning really set the tone for the rest of the pitch, and I agree that it allowed you to add more content. I think the extra content in a shortened time span will actually help you in delivery, as your listeners will stay attentive, and gain more from the time they give you.